so I wrote this poem this morning, its rough but I like it. I need some critiquing on the poem so feel free to tell me what you think, I can take it lol. I wrote this poem in like 5 minutes so I Need to work on it, but it never hurts to share.
When snow falls and the air is chilly
When winter comes and we all get silly
We work all year and do our part
We’ve bin good for goodness sake
As children yell “its time to wake”
Has Santa come and gone again
Run and see presents under the tree
The kids so thrilled we laugh and sing
Its Christmas day its come again
I’m glad to share it with you my friend
SO I know some of it doesn’t work but tell me what you think.
Marry Christmas from ArtfulHelix and family