I beg on my knees, need comments!

I put this post up yesterday http://artfulhelix.wordpress.com/2012/02/24/shale-my-mined-explode-now-helix/ I got likes, but no comments yet. But I want to know if I am going in the right direction with this book. So Please if you have the time go and read my first chapter and tell me what you think of it. I have been getting rather discouraged lately. I need to know what real readers think! Thank you for your time.

Playing with shadows

Now this art work is cool. Remember when we where kids, playing with shadow pupets? I loved makeing the differant shapes and images. This person has taken shadow pupets to a hole new leval. see this image and more at : https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=118602291491383&set=a.118588208159458.15675.118587544826191&type=3&theater#!/photo.php?fbid=118602291491383&set=a.118588208159458.15675.118587544826191&type=3&permPage=1