This post is a new poem I wanted to re-blog. I would love more reviews of this peace. Feel free to say what ever you want, I can take criticism.
Jan27
This post is a new poem I wanted to re-blog. I would love more reviews of this peace. Feel free to say what ever you want, I can take criticism.
i really like you poem – i like how the language was sparse but still very descriptive, very recognisable to anyone who has experienced writer’s block – i liked how it was structured, like a story, with a beginning, a middle and an end – i tried to think of something less positive to say but couldn’t really: spelling? – most i liked its irony: a piece of writing about not writing, very clever
Thank you. It actualy started out ass a normal post, but became a poem. I have bin told I don’t have a normal stial. I was corected on the spelling on a nother site I posted it to. Thank you for the comment, I am happy with this peace considering it was off the top of my head.
I think its good to have your own style and often top-of-the-head stuff is the best ever poetry – as for spelling, i don’t think its really important and if you always spell the same word the same way then it just becomes part of your style
I agree wholeheartedly! I was getting bashed all the time on this one writers site I joined so I stopped going. Its the only place that has happened. Thanks for liking my post for my son. He was so happy to see that people where liking it. Thanks again, always nice to hear from others. My blog is only 2 moths old so I still don’t get a lot of comments.